at the beach

WALHT write an interesting recount.
I am trying to add different beginning.
I found it hard because I keep on copying the words I rote.
Next time want to remember to add full stops and capitals.

12.00 pm I went to the beach with my family.I came with my uncle and we went to the beach and I my Dad,Mum,Brother.We went for a swim in the ocean for 40 seconds. then we got out and had a bacon and egg pie each and pork roast. after the food we went on a boat and we saw dolphins jumping around in the sea.Then we went back on the sand and then my brother went on the spinner and he fell of he was on the ground for twenty seconds.And then he woke up and he just build a sand castle and then my brother fell on it.so we decided to do some think cool

so we went by the skate park and then my uncle got his skate board and he did some cool tricks.Me and my family were suprised. we said you should show it to everybody so he did it and someone was proud.